I will upload ccbrief synopsis about my relationship between my father, my grandfather, and my mother while she was young I need to make a it as short documentary, but I need to write a brief synopsis. I already wrote one, but my professor wasn’t happy with it so I’m gonna upload my old version of my work on my professor feedback plus I have a video I will be Handel to the support team so they can show it to you and that can allow you to fix my assignment easier. You can use it on my
My professor, a note:Hi AbdullahThe resubmitted work does not demonstrate you have made a meaningful attempt to address the feedback to improve the work. I have attached the feedback again for your guidance.The change you have made is the addition of one paragraph, and some references. The areas that need to be addressed are broader than this.To plan your redraft, use the feedback document to:
Check the marks you have been awarded
Look at the yellow highlighted box to determine what standard of work was present
Decide what needs to be improved to achieve a pass grade or better in all areas
For the areas with low marks, look at the descriptions in the pass or credit column to determine what the work needs to include for you to achieve a higher mark than the one you were given
Importantly you have misunderstood key aspects (what a logline is, what format means, and what the themes/issues are, and the word count). All these need to be addressed to improve the work. Give each section a heading, as suggested below.I am offering you one further week to submit a final attempt at the work. Please send the work by the end of Wednesday 19th October. Do not work on Assignment 3 until you hand in a new draft of Assignment 2. I will give you more time for the last piece of work.The assignment instructions are found below:This is a visually appealing PDF containing at least 20 reference images and 1300-1500 words.
Include:The TITLE of the documentaryThe LOGLINE or one sentence synopsis (30 words max)Also there is a video link that I’m going to attach in the chathttps://gofile.io/d/MzK02MThis is a video link of my professor, explaining how to write itAn expanded SYNOPSIS of the STORY – 450-500 wordsA description of the target AUDIENCE – 50-100 wordsA description of the CHARACTERS or subjects of the documentary and how they function, supported with reference images – 150-200 wordsA description of the FORMAT of the documentary, supported by reference images – 250-300 wordsAn explanation of the ISSUES at stake, including evidence of research – 300-350 wordsAll of these areas are discussed at length in the slides I sent you and SLSS.I look forward to receiving the work on or before next Wednesday.
1500 words+ visual references
I want you to focus on the rubric Also Isaiah mentioned if you read my story, you can use your imagination to make more drama and to make it good five minute documentary synopsis. You don’t mind I want you to read my story very close to my main idea of the documentary is the confidence between my mother and her father job and what is a separation and Islam. Because huge element can be one of the reasons that my grandfather did not contact for my mother.